Congratulations on new website. I wonder whether your copy might need a little refinement. For instance the phrase "We are looking for work..." doesn't really give off the right vibes. I think you might benefit from speaking to someone who does marketing / websites or writes copy. Maybe Rik will know such a person?
Congratulations on new website. I wonder whether your copy might need a little refinement. For instance the phrase "We are looking for work..." doesn't really give off the right vibes. I think you might benefit from speaking to someone who does marketing / websites or writes copy. Maybe Rik will know such a person?
ReplyDeleteThanks Mike I have removed the phrase. At the moment the website is just holding, the actual wording is still yet to be complete.
ReplyDeleteI have also talked to Rik about getting more content on the site and doing a few foley videos in the near future.